In my class, I have many friends. One of them is Iandhika Sabda Alam Mashar. He is 20 years old. He is multitalented man that has some wonderful abilities. The first is the ability of speaking English. He can speak English, for he is studying at English department. The second is the ability of speaking Arabic. He had ever been in Islamic boarding school for almost six years, so he could speak Arabic well. The last is the ability of playing drum. It is a favorite activity which he always do it at the weekend. That's all about a very multitalented man. I hope he should focus on what he wants to be.
Clear, complete, and very brief writing hagi. Good job. It's really nice to read a well-written paragraph. Nevertheless, you still have to mark the topic sentence and the concluding sentence as well. Mind ur S-V agreement and the use of modal. All in all, it seems u already hev understanding on how to write the paragraph well. Excellent!
BalasHapusPS: It'd be much more interesting if u also put the picture of som1 u a describing:-)
BalasHapusowhhh...for the next, I'll try to do the best...
BalasHapusbtw..thanks for ur comment Miss..^^