There are several things that you have to concern in making a new friendship. First of all, absolutely, you have to introduce your self. If you fear to do it, you should make a situation that your friend know you. For example, if your friend were having a difficult situation, you should try to help him/her so that your friend would know you without you introduce your self. Next, it deals with knowing what your friend likes. Someone will interst you if you understand what he/she wants. And the last, it comes from doing the same things that your friend does.It will increase your friendship if you are always together. I think there are so many things that you have to aware. It just the major things that you have to know. I hope you would have a new friendship.
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Nice topic, Hagi. Well, is it based on ur own experience, or the research u've done:-). I don't agree with the last point u write. A g'd fren will appreciate all differences we have. We do not hafta do the same thing if we wanna build mutual frienship. Don't u think so?
BalasHapusWell, overall, it's a well-developed paragraph;however, u still need to elaborate ur supporting sentences. Try to add some more details. Hagi, I don't noe what happened 2 u when u write this, but I identify some mistakes in grammar in accordance with the wrongly use parts of speech, grammar consistency, and preposition combination. The mistake is 'spelling' is also detected! U a basically a g'd and creative writer. Please, be consistent, ok!
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